So.... made a second page. This one got way too crowded, I think. I need to be more careful to save space for text as I go. It was tricky fitting those speech bubbles in, and there isn't as much dialogue as I had hoped in a couple of spots.
All in all, good stuff.
Still not sure how many of these I'll make or what kind of schedule they might see. Haven't started work on page 3 yet, so who knows. I might.
(P.S. How strong does language need to be before I tag the Deviation mature content? They say that I should mark it if I "feel uncomfortable with minors seeing it" or something, but I swear in front of minors relatively often, so I'm not really the one to ask.)